What is our final narrative?

 

After a lot of idea's we have concluded on a narrative that is appropriate to our setting. Our opening's storyline will be portrayed through use of camera work and editing cutting between two situations. So, here it is:

A teenage girl and boy are playing hide and seek in the park.

 The boy ventures into the woods and begins to feel another presence.

Meanwhile, the girl is counting alone in the park, with her hands covering her eyes.

 The audience understands that something has happened to the boy, whilst the girl is left alone counting.

We then see the unknown presence watching the girl, and eventually sneaking up on her.

The name of the film then comes at the end of the opening.

We have decided to call the film "TEN" as the girl counts to ten, and is inevitably counting down to her own danger. It highlights the fact that they are playing hide and seek, a mysterious and secrtive game, which reflects the qualities of the unknown presence. We have chosen a cryptic antagonist because our research shows that people are most fearful of the unknown.

 

By Emili Hone, Sasha Gibson, Melissa Owen